Writing With Scott

Description:We read a story called "Licked". We wrote down what it was about. We chose the ideas from the book and wrote about them. This is the result.

Me and my brother Joey wanted to pull a rat prank on our mum. She is extremely scared of rats.

When she was doing the dishes we put a giant fake rat in the cabinet so when she put away the plates she would get a huge fright. But then the plan backfired... Dad came home and he was hungry he walked in the kitchen and got out the cake from the fridge slowly crept to the cabinet and before We  could say stop AHHHHH.

You kids are in big trouble we both quietly sneaked back to our rooms and locked the door. in the morning when he calms down we can make it up to him even though the plan didn't work it was still worth it. next time we need to think bigger and better I said yeah way bigger said joey.

Istatement

Description: At school we have chosen to do an Istatement video/Role play my group was doing a role play this is what we have finished!

Feedback\Feedforward:I thought that it was a good video but I could not understand you guys that well -Maya

Evaluation:Thank You Maya for the feedback and feedforward next time I will try do more to make our voices louder -Gaby F

My Camp Writing

Entertain: Humor writing

P persuade

I inform    
E entertain
S self

Feedback: It's a great story but there are some mistakes like punctuation -Patrick

My Whakapapa

Description: In class I have been at kapa haka and all the people  doing ETReo Has been making a whakapapa and so all the kapa haka people Have done it to.

Feedback\FeedForward: I liked how you remembered every one in your family and you took your time and exfert in this and you did a great job. next you could see if you could get a photo of every body not just yourself -Hannah G

Evaluation: Thanks Hannah for the great feedback and feedforward and I really did take my time and effort Into all of this but next time I will try add a few more people and try remember a few more names.

2016 Camp Portfolio Post

Description:On Tuesday all the year fives and sixes went to camp and we did ten activities threw the past three days for the first dinner we had nachos and for desert we had apple crumble. For my first activity I did was Team Initiative. after dinner we did our skit practice and then we wrote in our camp diaries. Once we had finished that we got into our PJ's and got into bed. The second night was the same but before bed we had a bomb fire while we all ate smores.

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FeedBack\FeedForward: Good job Gaby you put allot of effort into describing your week and I hope you keep It that way - Zoey 

  

OneWord 2016

Description: We have been working on something called a one word a one word is something that is you are focusing on for this year my one word is agency I chose this word because I think that I called work on doing that and try show agency more.

Feedback\Feedforward: I like all the little characters on your letters, I don't think you have anything to work on. Abby I

Evaluation: Thanks Abby For giving me Good feedback and feedforward I will try my best to keep my work this good.